User contributions for Douglas

10 December 2016

• 16:0216:02, 10 December 2016 diff hist +3‎ Template:Government ‎No edit summary
• 15:5815:58, 10 December 2016 diff hist +144‎ Governments ‎ add commas; add a few words to clarify or fix run on sentences

9 December 2016

• 12:3212:32, 9 December 2016 diff hist +34‎ Money ‎ add more commas, and add a few clarifying words
• 11:0011:00, 9 December 2016 diff hist +21‎ Money ‎ commas and added a few words

30 November 2016

• 12:1912:19, 30 November 2016 diff hist +16‎ Cities of refuge ‎ →‎Cities of Refuge: add commas; changed "distant" to "distinct"

28 November 2016

• 12:2412:24, 28 November 2016 diff hist +9‎ Matthew 5 ‎ add apostrophe; add commas; fix a run-on sentence

27 November 2016

• 01:0201:02, 27 November 2016 diff hist +15‎ Family trusts ‎ add commas ... fixed one run-on sentence. Good work. This topic is much needed for helping families.
• 00:5100:51, 27 November 2016 diff hist −1‎ m Family trusts ‎ →‎Revocability or irrevocability

24 November 2016

• 01:5501:55, 24 November 2016 diff hist +56‎ Template:Right of Self-determination ‎ some errors were simple to fix; one was perplexing: * You have contracted and coveted ... done that. Maybe change it to "you've done that" current
• 00:3300:33, 24 November 2016 diff hist +37‎ Golem ‎ spelling errors and other errors fixed, added commas
• 00:1900:19, 24 November 2016 diff hist +93‎ Template:Self-ownership ‎ add commas; add "State's interests, duties and investments" clause. Added some dashes. What is Gomel? It is right before "corporate entity" current

22 November 2016

• 19:5619:56, 22 November 2016 diff hist +974‎ Template:Forgive ‎ →‎Forgiveness works: added some thoughts about exoneration and a footnote about forbearance.
• 19:0419:04, 22 November 2016 diff hist +110‎ Template:Forgive ‎ add commas; After "term nasa' is translated forgive ... " , I worked on problems in the next sentence. I hope it still has the intended message.

17 November 2016

• 23:5923:59, 17 November 2016 diff hist +98‎ Hierarchy ‎ add commas; add words (such as 'it') for sake of clarity
• 23:0323:03, 17 November 2016 diff hist +53‎ Hierarchy ‎ add commas; fix run-on sentences (for good message clarity).

14 November 2016

• 12:4912:49, 14 November 2016 diff hist +338‎ Temptations ‎ add commas, add clarifying words; add to the last para before double lines
• 01:5301:53, 14 November 2016 diff hist +1,568‎ Talk:Trust ‎ I added a several thoughts current

13 November 2016

• 12:4812:48, 13 November 2016 diff hist −24‎ Follow the White Rabbit ‎ →‎Transcript: making transcript accurate to the audio, part 1 of my work
• 12:0712:07, 13 November 2016 diff hist +1,206‎ N Talk:Trust ‎ An attempt to sum up the message. Ministers would be wise to thoroughly understand it and do accordingly.
• 11:5711:57, 13 November 2016 diff hist +39‎ Trust ‎ →‎Ministers of trust: add commas, clarify about the two churches, modify the warning that elders not look to the minister (it was slightly unclear, but is my approach better?)