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9 December 2016
- 11:0011:00, 9 December 2016 diff hist +21 Money commas and added a few words
30 November 2016
- 12:1912:19, 30 November 2016 diff hist +16 Cities of refuge →Cities of Refuge: add commas; changed "distant" to "distinct"
28 November 2016
- 12:2412:24, 28 November 2016 diff hist +9 Matthew 5 add apostrophe; add commas; fix a run-on sentence
27 November 2016
- 01:0201:02, 27 November 2016 diff hist +15 Family trusts add commas ... fixed one run-on sentence. Good work. This topic is much needed for helping families.
- 00:5100:51, 27 November 2016 diff hist −1 m Family trusts →Revocability or irrevocability
24 November 2016
- 01:5501:55, 24 November 2016 diff hist +56 Template:Right of Self-determination some errors were simple to fix; one was perplexing: * You have contracted and coveted ... done that. Maybe change it to "you've done that" current
- 00:3300:33, 24 November 2016 diff hist +37 Golem spelling errors and other errors fixed, added commas
- 00:1900:19, 24 November 2016 diff hist +93 Template:Self-ownership add commas; add "State's interests, duties and investments" clause. Added some dashes. What is Gomel? It is right before "corporate entity" current
22 November 2016
- 19:5619:56, 22 November 2016 diff hist +974 Template:Forgive →Forgiveness works: added some thoughts about exoneration and a footnote about forbearance.
- 19:0419:04, 22 November 2016 diff hist +110 Template:Forgive add commas; After "term nasa' is translated forgive ... " , I worked on problems in the next sentence. I hope it still has the intended message.
17 November 2016
- 23:5923:59, 17 November 2016 diff hist +98 Hierarchy add commas; add words (such as 'it') for sake of clarity
- 23:0323:03, 17 November 2016 diff hist +53 Hierarchy add commas; fix run-on sentences (for good message clarity).
14 November 2016
- 12:4912:49, 14 November 2016 diff hist +338 Temptations add commas, add clarifying words; add to the last para before double lines
- 01:5301:53, 14 November 2016 diff hist +1,568 Talk:Trust I added a several thoughts current
13 November 2016
- 12:4812:48, 13 November 2016 diff hist −24 Follow the White Rabbit →Transcript: making transcript accurate to the audio, part 1 of my work
- 12:0712:07, 13 November 2016 diff hist +1,206 N Talk:Trust An attempt to sum up the message. Ministers would be wise to thoroughly understand it and do accordingly.
- 11:5711:57, 13 November 2016 diff hist +39 Trust →Ministers of trust: add commas, clarify about the two churches, modify the warning that elders not look to the minister (it was slightly unclear, but is my approach better?)
- 11:3811:38, 13 November 2016 diff hist +27 Egypt add commas... I think "God told His people ... nor were their leaders ..." is more congruent, rather than "... us ... nor were their leaders" I wonder if the "(and us)" is needed.
- 11:2711:27, 13 November 2016 diff hist +31 Logos add commas, remove an extra 'a'
11 November 2016
- 09:4509:45, 11 November 2016 diff hist +23 Trust fix spelling errors, add commas, add a few missing words
10 November 2016
- 01:3801:38, 10 November 2016 diff hist +309 Apply Ten Commandments Add comments about the first 'word'
6 November 2016
- 12:3512:35, 6 November 2016 diff hist +1,063 Apply Ten Commandments Add to footnotes; add some text
5 November 2016
- 20:1320:13, 5 November 2016 diff hist +29 m Template:Government add references/ tag
- 20:1120:11, 5 November 2016 diff hist +11 Minarchism add commas and fix spelling errors
- 20:0520:05, 5 November 2016 diff hist +9 Template:Government Add commas, fix a spelling error
29 October 2016
- 12:0912:09, 29 October 2016 diff hist +40 Ease into freedom add commas, and add a few words in the last paragraph
26 October 2016
- 10:4010:40, 26 October 2016 diff hist +16 Template:Golden rule add commas. Fix an incorrect sentence break before the word "which".
25 October 2016
- 14:1814:18, 25 October 2016 diff hist +1,149 Apply Ten Commandments Adding info about the list of words (verse 1)
- 13:2813:28, 25 October 2016 diff hist +5 Ye are bought →Bought: a few commas added
- 13:2513:25, 25 October 2016 diff hist +101 Ye are bought →The Liberty Way: add commas and clarifying words. I hope "That is what it means to gather in the name of Christ" is an accurate correction, instead of "That means to gather ..."
- 13:1013:10, 25 October 2016 diff hist +31 Ye are bought →Sold and Numbered: add commas and clarifying words
- 09:5909:59, 25 October 2016 diff hist +4,572 N Apply Ten Commandments Explaining in depth
- 08:2308:23, 25 October 2016 diff hist +137 Ten Commandments Starting up the page for deeper discussion on Ten Commandments
24 October 2016
- 23:3223:32, 24 October 2016 diff hist +303 Template:10table →The Laws of God: modified what I added earlier today, in an attempt to heed good suggestions of feedback
- 15:0115:01, 24 October 2016 diff hist +772 Template:10table →The Laws of God: added a few more thoughts, to clarify
- 12:0712:07, 24 October 2016 diff hist +418 N Talk:NAP Discussion to reveal a pacifist's fallacy current
- 12:0012:00, 24 October 2016 diff hist +648 NAP adding some thoughts of mine, to help drive the point: a network is essential for righteously counter-attacking oppressors
23 October 2016
- 23:5523:55, 23 October 2016 diff hist +48 Redemption →Trafficker in Commerce: removed consecutive duplicate words, add commas, add clarifying words
22 October 2016
- 18:1118:11, 22 October 2016 diff hist +873 Burnt offering Explain the singer in a footnote
- 18:0318:03, 22 October 2016 diff hist +31 Burnt offering add link
- 18:0118:01, 22 October 2016 diff hist −3 Burnt offering change welfare link
- 17:5417:54, 22 October 2016 diff hist −5 Burnt offering bullets?
- 17:5217:52, 22 October 2016 diff hist +11 Burnt offering indenting?
- 17:4917:49, 22 October 2016 diff hist −7 m Burnt offering No edit summary
- 17:4717:47, 22 October 2016 diff hist +86 Burnt offering Add comments about an offering is given
- 17:4217:42, 22 October 2016 diff hist +373 Burnt offering Add comment about church ministers and describing some about the altar of Christ; add links
- 17:3317:33, 22 October 2016 diff hist +33 Burnt offering clarify
- 17:2217:22, 22 October 2016 diff hist +325 Burnt offering Add footnote to describe a modern civil altar more clearly. Ancient Rome also had its civil altars. I'm not the best writer to add such comments about Rome.
- 17:1617:16, 22 October 2016 diff hist +904 Burnt offering add links
- 16:5516:55, 22 October 2016 diff hist +4 Burnt offering Link to Corban page