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22 October 2016
- 17:2217:22, 22 October 2016 diff hist +325 Burnt offering Add footnote to describe a modern civil altar more clearly. Ancient Rome also had its civil altars. I'm not the best writer to add such comments about Rome.
- 17:1617:16, 22 October 2016 diff hist +904 Burnt offering add links
- 16:5516:55, 22 October 2016 diff hist +4 Burnt offering Link to Corban page
- 16:5016:50, 22 October 2016 diff hist +3,274 Burnt offering Add reference to Lev. 28 and other related scriptures
- 12:2012:20, 22 October 2016 diff hist +1,177 N 'strange fire' Definitions could be added, to more clearly define 'fire'
- 12:1012:10, 22 October 2016 diff hist +531 Burnt offering No edit summary
- 12:0112:01, 22 October 2016 diff hist −6 Burnt offering No edit summary
- 12:0012:00, 22 October 2016 diff hist +36 Burnt offering No edit summary
- 11:5911:59, 22 October 2016 diff hist +2,679 Burnt offering No edit summary
- 11:2911:29, 22 October 2016 diff hist +69 N Burnt offering add link
- 11:1811:18, 22 October 2016 diff hist 0 m Society and community No edit summary
- 11:1711:17, 22 October 2016 diff hist +210 Society and community add reference to Prov 22; add commas and clarifying words
- 11:0311:03, 22 October 2016 diff hist +69 Supreme being Fixing some wording, to clarify the message
- 10:4210:42, 22 October 2016 diff hist +33 Altruism the second sentence did not make sense; I think I fixed the problem.
21 October 2016
- 21:5121:51, 21 October 2016 diff hist +153 Bible add commas; add a few clarifying words
- 21:2121:21, 21 October 2016 diff hist +98 Template:Seeking the Kingdom of God add commas and some clarifying words
- 20:5320:53, 21 October 2016 diff hist +122 Exiting Babylon add commas and clarifying words
20 October 2016
- 15:2715:27, 20 October 2016 diff hist +71 Template:Seeking the Kingdom of God Fix links
14 October 2016
- 09:4709:47, 14 October 2016 diff hist +18 Bible →Some Questions: add commas and semicolon
- 09:4009:40, 14 October 2016 diff hist +14 Bible →Christian Conflict: change 'and' to 'versus', which denotes the contrast
- 09:3409:34, 14 October 2016 diff hist +6 Bible →The Purpose of Sacrifice: add commas and a dash
- 09:2809:28, 14 October 2016 diff hist +59 Bible add commas; add links; expound slightly about the Pharisee view
10 October 2016
- 16:4616:46, 10 October 2016 diff hist +83 Template:Repentance add commas and words needed to make good sentence structures
7 October 2016
- 23:4123:41, 7 October 2016 diff hist +241 Merchandise add commas; add a thought to contrast with "the beast in us kills the soul", and it acts as a lead-in with what follows that paragraph
- 23:0623:06, 7 October 2016 diff hist +61 Free assemblies add commas, add clarifying words; add one sentence in the conclusion, to drive the final point home
- 15:2215:22, 7 October 2016 diff hist +855 Anarchist →Leaders without Rulers: added a sentence to connect leaders and rulers (in the world), and references about world (kosmos) and heaven (ouranos). I used eSword. You might have a better way of explaining world and heaven in the footnotes.
- 11:2611:26, 7 October 2016 diff hist +476 Anarchist add commas and add a Bible passage related to archon
5 October 2016
- 22:4822:48, 5 October 2016 diff hist +60 Contract add commas and some words
- 22:3622:36, 5 October 2016 diff hist +32 m Template:Benefactors of the Slothful →The Slothful
- 22:3522:35, 5 October 2016 diff hist +40 Template:Benefactors of the Slothful →The Slothful: commas added
- 22:2222:22, 5 October 2016 diff hist +48 Template:Covet →The Great Society Scheme: add commas and a few words
- 21:5621:56, 5 October 2016 diff hist +8 Template:Covet →The Effects of Covetousness: commas and clarifying words
- 21:3521:35, 5 October 2016 diff hist +225 Template:Covet →Covet: changed the quote from Merriam-Webster, so that more info about the synonyms is included, but now it is not a direct quote (as it was before)
- 18:2718:27, 5 October 2016 diff hist +8 m Religion No edit summary
- 15:1215:12, 5 October 2016 diff hist +603 Religion add commas and clarifying words; also added some content to False Religion
4 October 2016
- 14:2214:22, 4 October 2016 diff hist +10 Fiction of law →Modern Legal definition: add commas and clarifying words
- 14:1514:15, 4 October 2016 diff hist +25 Fiction of law →Examples: add commas and words for clarity
- 14:0414:04, 4 October 2016 diff hist +65 Fiction of law →Legal Fiction: add commas
- 13:5113:51, 4 October 2016 diff hist +288 Fiction of law add commas and clarifying words
- 12:4212:42, 4 October 2016 diff hist +26 Fiction of law clarify the quick definition
- 11:0511:05, 4 October 2016 diff hist +133 Undocumented add commas and clarifying words; making correct sentence structures. The writer does his part (an important part), and the grammarian does his part. Teamwork! Blessings to you.
3 October 2016
- 11:3511:35, 3 October 2016 diff hist +9 Golden rule add commas
- 11:2411:24, 3 October 2016 diff hist +963 N Talk:Creed of the Apostles Drawing attention to one paragraph (and then, if you wish, you could delete this section of discussion after the paragraph is modified)
- 11:1011:10, 3 October 2016 diff hist +23 Creed of the Apostles add commas and add words to help with clarity of message; see discussion page
1 October 2016
- 23:3423:34, 1 October 2016 diff hist 0 m Sarcasm fix link
- 23:3223:32, 1 October 2016 diff hist +72 Sarcasm add links
- 23:1823:18, 1 October 2016 diff hist +1,581 Sarcasm Added Isa. 28 and Sarcasm etymology; compassion and mockery do not mix ... feel free to adjust the message, if you have a wider view or clearer way to describe
30 September 2016
- 23:3123:31, 30 September 2016 diff hist +103 Template:Eyes three Hebrew words: only middle letter is different ... I hope I helped clarify. Shem letter has to do with what?
- 01:2501:25, 30 September 2016 diff hist +7 Romans 11 add commas
- 01:2001:20, 30 September 2016 diff hist +59 Hebrews 8 add commas and a few words to complete the sentence structure
- 01:0801:08, 30 September 2016 diff hist +430 Liturgy Removed duplications; added some about what Justin wrote; expounded on Isaiah 4:1; added commas ... I hope I did not go beyond. This article needed some major help.
29 September 2016
- 22:4622:46, 29 September 2016 diff hist +16 Template:Eyes →In his own eyes: commas and things
- 22:3722:37, 29 September 2016 diff hist +6 Communist Manifesto misspelling corrected, commas added
- 22:1822:18, 29 September 2016 diff hist +73 Template:Damnable heresies →Damnable heresies: add lots of commas; add a few words to help with clarity
- 10:4710:47, 29 September 2016 diff hist 0 m Heresies No edit summary
- 10:4510:45, 29 September 2016 diff hist +607 Heresies Add paragraph about 'they with are approved', contrasted with modern christians
- 09:4709:47, 29 September 2016 diff hist +178 Heresies Add clarity to explain Titus 3 heretic
- 01:0301:03, 29 September 2016 diff hist +285 Lavender brief notes about fungus on lavender plants
- 00:3900:39, 29 September 2016 diff hist +858 Lavender changed pruning instructions ... to the best of my current knowledge
28 September 2016
- 23:4323:43, 28 September 2016 diff hist +199 Lavender No edit summary
- 23:1623:16, 28 September 2016 diff hist +2 Lavender No edit summary
- 23:1223:12, 28 September 2016 diff hist −20 Lavender No edit summary
- 23:0923:09, 28 September 2016 diff hist −21 Lavender No edit summary
- 23:0423:04, 28 September 2016 diff hist +755 Lavender added Twickel variety, which is well-suited for the high desert
- 22:3422:34, 28 September 2016 diff hist +186 Lavender add info about the white variety available from Bandon; it will not do well in the high desert
26 September 2016
- 20:5320:53, 26 September 2016 diff hist +6 Lavender →Chart List: zone for Super variety
- 10:2410:24, 26 September 2016 diff hist +30 Lavender No edit summary
- 10:1810:18, 26 September 2016 diff hist +89 Lavender →Pruning
- 10:0810:08, 26 September 2016 diff hist +37 Lavender add Down-derry web URL
24 September 2016
- 00:0400:04, 24 September 2016 diff hist +227 Capitalism →Biblical Capitalism: add commas and add a few words for sake of clarity
23 September 2016
- 23:2723:27, 23 September 2016 diff hist +11 Capitalism →American Salvation: commas added
- 23:1823:18, 23 September 2016 diff hist +35 Capitalism →The Ugly Capitalist: commas and misspellings
- 23:0323:03, 23 September 2016 diff hist +16 Capitalism →Free Governments: add commas; fix spelling errors
- 17:1417:14, 23 September 2016 diff hist +34 Militia 'because' did not make sense after 'The Occupy Refuge Movement'; added commas
- 13:4013:40, 23 September 2016 diff hist +58 Capitalism added commas; added a few connecting words; fix spelling errors
- 12:5412:54, 23 September 2016 diff hist +797 Template:Christian Defined Add ref to John 15:1-6; commas, redo a sentence for the sake of clarity current
- 12:3312:33, 23 September 2016 diff hist +64 Church legally defined more commas and words to help clarify, hoping the intended message was not changed
- 09:5709:57, 23 September 2016 diff hist +459 Church legally defined add commas and add John 14 reference, with words about the temple being His body, which is those who are doers
- 09:2509:25, 23 September 2016 diff hist +75 Covetous Practices commas, spelling, added words for sake of clarity
22 September 2016
- 23:4123:41, 22 September 2016 diff hist +4 m Template:Early Christian checklist No edit summary
- 23:3523:35, 22 September 2016 diff hist +47 Relativism add commas and a few words for clarity; fix spelling errors
- 23:1923:19, 22 September 2016 diff hist +188 Template:Tithing →Standing: add Micah 6:8 reference
- 23:1523:15, 22 September 2016 diff hist 0 m Template:Tithing →Standing
- 23:1423:14, 22 September 2016 diff hist +12 m Template:Tithing →Standing
- 23:0323:03, 22 September 2016 diff hist +1 m Template:Treasury →What treasury
- 22:5622:56, 22 September 2016 diff hist +67 Template:Treasury →What treasury: add references section; add commas and some words for clarity's sake
- 20:1920:19, 22 September 2016 diff hist +8 Template:Treasury →Stone upon a stone: commas added
- 20:1320:13, 22 September 2016 diff hist +406 Template:Tithing →Standing: How can you serve God without offering your flesh; added lots of commas .... whew!
- 18:3718:37, 22 September 2016 diff hist +149 Template:Tithing →Jesus freed: added commas, and words for clarity
- 18:2318:23, 22 September 2016 diff hist +49 Template:Tithing →Justin and the Early Church: spelling error in title, added commas, added words for clarity's sake
- 18:1318:13, 22 September 2016 diff hist +151 Template:Tithing →Melchizedek: added commas and a few words to help with clarity
- 17:5617:56, 22 September 2016 diff hist +192 Template:Tithing →Schemes of government: Mention of Herod, in the first paragraph, seemed unclear; I added content, hoping to add clarity on that point
- 17:3317:33, 22 September 2016 diff hist +194 Template:Tithing →The Unjust Steward: added words about Tutor part of the process
- 17:0517:05, 22 September 2016 diff hist +124 Template:Tithing →What is Right: changes to help with clarity of the message
- 16:5716:57, 22 September 2016 diff hist +704 Template:Tithing →Types of Tithes: added words in para about 2nd type of tithe; added words (and footnote) in para about peace offerings; added commas
- 16:1716:17, 22 September 2016 diff hist +15 Template:Tithing →Tributary and Society: add commas; add a few words to clarify message
- 16:0616:06, 22 September 2016 diff hist +39 Template:Tithing →The Character of Society: commas and spelling error fixed; added words to help clarity of message
- 15:5715:57, 22 September 2016 diff hist +26 Template:Tithing →Standing: add references section
- 15:1815:18, 22 September 2016 diff hist +68 Template:Tithing →National Tithe
- 15:1015:10, 22 September 2016 diff hist +212 Template:Tithing →Honor Thy Father: added explanation to "foundational right of the father"; added commas; added references section