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17:2217:22, 22 October 2016 diff hist +325‎ Burnt offering ‎ Add footnote to describe a modern civil altar more clearly. Ancient Rome also had its civil altars. I'm not the best writer to add such comments about Rome.
17:1617:16, 22 October 2016 diff hist +904‎ Burnt offering ‎ add links
16:5516:55, 22 October 2016 diff hist +4‎ Burnt offering ‎ Link to Corban page
16:5016:50, 22 October 2016 diff hist +3,274‎ Burnt offering ‎ Add reference to Lev. 28 and other related scriptures
12:2012:20, 22 October 2016 diff hist +1,177‎ N 'strange fire' ‎ Definitions could be added, to more clearly define 'fire'
12:1012:10, 22 October 2016 diff hist +531‎ Burnt offering ‎No edit summary
12:0112:01, 22 October 2016 diff hist −6‎ Burnt offering ‎No edit summary
12:0012:00, 22 October 2016 diff hist +36‎ Burnt offering ‎No edit summary
11:5911:59, 22 October 2016 diff hist +2,679‎ Burnt offering ‎No edit summary
11:2911:29, 22 October 2016 diff hist +69‎ N Burnt offering ‎ add link
11:1811:18, 22 October 2016 diff hist 0‎ m Society and community ‎No edit summary
11:1711:17, 22 October 2016 diff hist +210‎ Society and community ‎ add reference to Prov 22; add commas and clarifying words
11:0311:03, 22 October 2016 diff hist +69‎ Supreme being ‎ Fixing some wording, to clarify the message
10:4210:42, 22 October 2016 diff hist +33‎ Altruism ‎ the second sentence did not make sense; I think I fixed the problem.

21:5121:51, 21 October 2016 diff hist +153‎ Bible ‎ add commas; add a few clarifying words
21:2121:21, 21 October 2016 diff hist +98‎ Template:Seeking the Kingdom of God ‎ add commas and some clarifying words
20:5320:53, 21 October 2016 diff hist +122‎ Exiting Babylon ‎ add commas and clarifying words

09:4709:47, 14 October 2016 diff hist +18‎ Bible ‎ →‎Some Questions: add commas and semicolon
09:4009:40, 14 October 2016 diff hist +14‎ Bible ‎ →‎Christian Conflict: change 'and' to 'versus', which denotes the contrast
09:3409:34, 14 October 2016 diff hist +6‎ Bible ‎ →‎The Purpose of Sacrifice: add commas and a dash
09:2809:28, 14 October 2016 diff hist +59‎ Bible ‎ add commas; add links; expound slightly about the Pharisee view

16:4616:46, 10 October 2016 diff hist +83‎ Template:Repentance ‎ add commas and words needed to make good sentence structures

23:4123:41, 7 October 2016 diff hist +241‎ Merchandise ‎ add commas; add a thought to contrast with "the beast in us kills the soul", and it acts as a lead-in with what follows that paragraph
23:0623:06, 7 October 2016 diff hist +61‎ Free assemblies ‎ add commas, add clarifying words; add one sentence in the conclusion, to drive the final point home
15:2215:22, 7 October 2016 diff hist +855‎ Anarchist ‎ →‎Leaders without Rulers: added a sentence to connect leaders and rulers (in the world), and references about world (kosmos) and heaven (ouranos). I used eSword. You might have a better way of explaining world and heaven in the footnotes.
11:2611:26, 7 October 2016 diff hist +476‎ Anarchist ‎ add commas and add a Bible passage related to archon

22:4822:48, 5 October 2016 diff hist +60‎ Contract ‎ add commas and some words
22:3622:36, 5 October 2016 diff hist +32‎ m Template:Benefactors of the Slothful ‎ →‎The Slothful
22:3522:35, 5 October 2016 diff hist +40‎ Template:Benefactors of the Slothful ‎ →‎The Slothful: commas added
22:2222:22, 5 October 2016 diff hist +48‎ Template:Covet ‎ →‎The Great Society Scheme: add commas and a few words
21:5621:56, 5 October 2016 diff hist +8‎ Template:Covet ‎ →‎The Effects of Covetousness: commas and clarifying words
21:3521:35, 5 October 2016 diff hist +225‎ Template:Covet ‎ →‎Covet: changed the quote from Merriam-Webster, so that more info about the synonyms is included, but now it is not a direct quote (as it was before)
18:2718:27, 5 October 2016 diff hist +8‎ m Religion ‎No edit summary
15:1215:12, 5 October 2016 diff hist +603‎ Religion ‎ add commas and clarifying words; also added some content to False Religion

14:2214:22, 4 October 2016 diff hist +10‎ Fiction of law ‎ →‎Modern Legal definition: add commas and clarifying words
14:1514:15, 4 October 2016 diff hist +25‎ Fiction of law ‎ →‎Examples: add commas and words for clarity
14:0414:04, 4 October 2016 diff hist +65‎ Fiction of law ‎ →‎Legal Fiction: add commas
13:5113:51, 4 October 2016 diff hist +288‎ Fiction of law ‎ add commas and clarifying words
12:4212:42, 4 October 2016 diff hist +26‎ Fiction of law ‎ clarify the quick definition
11:0511:05, 4 October 2016 diff hist +133‎ Undocumented ‎ add commas and clarifying words; making correct sentence structures. The writer does his part (an important part), and the grammarian does his part. Teamwork! Blessings to you.

11:3511:35, 3 October 2016 diff hist +9‎ Golden rule ‎ add commas
11:2411:24, 3 October 2016 diff hist +963‎ N Talk:Creed of the Apostles ‎ Drawing attention to one paragraph (and then, if you wish, you could delete this section of discussion after the paragraph is modified)
11:1011:10, 3 October 2016 diff hist +23‎ Creed of the Apostles ‎ add commas and add words to help with clarity of message; see discussion page

23:3423:34, 1 October 2016 diff hist 0‎ m Sarcasm ‎ fix link
23:3223:32, 1 October 2016 diff hist +72‎ Sarcasm ‎ add links
23:1823:18, 1 October 2016 diff hist +1,581‎ Sarcasm ‎ Added Isa. 28 and Sarcasm etymology; compassion and mockery do not mix ... feel free to adjust the message, if you have a wider view or clearer way to describe

23:3123:31, 30 September 2016 diff hist +103‎ Template:Eyes ‎ three Hebrew words: only middle letter is different ... I hope I helped clarify. Shem letter has to do with what?
01:2501:25, 30 September 2016 diff hist +7‎ Romans 11 ‎ add commas
01:2001:20, 30 September 2016 diff hist +59‎ Hebrews 8 ‎ add commas and a few words to complete the sentence structure

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